Unchartered River
Your gentle eyessurveying the rivers flow,I lie before you in nakedness,awaiting your entranceYou listen to gentle sighs of lifenourishing the land,or screams of crashing wavesheard in the...
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oh, patricia .... spectacular stuff here .... so warm and sensual .... love the metaphor of the river you've used .... then again ... lol ... I've got a thing for rivers ... this was beautifully done...
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An uncommon but beautifully employed metaphor here...the living body of the river...yielding its secrets to one who is bold enough to venture there...very good indeed...Every new beginning comes from...
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ooh, creative one here Pat! wonderful metaphors weaved into an eloquent expression of you sharing yourself with someone-mynxy
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Mona,,,ahh yeah, rivers flow, like love, thankyou so much, I was feeling ,,,uh,,,sensual.Patricia**See Patricias' Passions Forum At Poetry lovers**~Love stood still, imprinting your essence on my...
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Soulease, a river that flows is so much alive, like this metaphore was meant to portray,,,thankyou so much,,,Mynx,,,,Thankyou, your replys are so sweet, and it is fun doing the metaphores, my favorite...
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Patricia,Dang, shouldn't have read this one while at work. Sigh, won't get anymore work done, rushing home. Beautiful poem, so soft and sensual, makes me, well, i'll tell you later So, when did you...
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I am also at work! I find this so erotic, it calls out to me. I really enjoyed this.
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Jon-Paul,,,,hmmm, now let me think, did you tell me? geez, My memory,,,sigh,,,guess you will have to tell me again.Oh, and yeah, my muse met yours, geez, did you forget that? Are we having a memory...
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Rosie, Hi, and thankyou, geez, sorry to disturb you all at work,,,smile,,,good thing I have no access to a comp. where I work, for that matter, keep the pen and paper away too!Patricia**See Patricias'...
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